高考英语写作注意点——复合句

　　误：If we’ll go outing tomorrow depends on the weather.

　　正：Whether we’ll go outing depends on the weather.

　　析：if 不可用来引导主语从句。

　　昨天他没有上学的原因是他病了(from )。

　　误：The reason why he didn’t come to school yesterday was because he was ill.

　　正：The reason why he didn’t come to school yesterday was that he was ill.

　　析：because不可用来引导表语从句，但可用来引导表示原因的状语从句。

　　2. 注意在从句中使用正确的语序。名词性从句中的语序只能用陈述语序，不可以用疑问语序。如：

　　你能告诉我昨天你去了哪里吗？

　　误：Can you tell me where did you go yesterday?

　　正：Can you tell me where you went yesterday?

　　3. 注意主句和从句的谓语动词在时态和人称方面的一致性。如：

　　他是全班同学当中唯一会说法语的学生(from )。

　　误：He is the only one of the students in the class that speak French.

　　正：He is the only one of the students in the class that speaks French.

　　析：当先行词有the only 修饰时，定语从句中的谓语动词用单数形式。

　　他孩子告诉了我们他在街上所听到的一切。

　　误：The boy told us everything that he heard in the street.

　　正：The boy told us everything that he had heard in the street.

　　析：很明显，定语从句中的谓语动词所表示的动作发生在主句谓语动作之前，应用过去完成时。

　　4. 注意引导状语从句的从属连词不可以同并列连词同时出现在一个句子中。如：

　　虽然天已经黑了，但是他还在田里工作。

　　误：Although it was dark, but he still worked in the fields

　　正：Although it was dark, he still worked in the fields.

　　析：although是从属连词，but是并列连词。它们不能同时出现在一个句子中。

　　因为他上周淋了一场大雨，所以患上了重感冒。

　　误：Because he was caught in a heavy rain last week, so he caught a very bad cold.

　　正：Because he was caught in a heavy rain last week, he caught a very bad cold.

　　析：because 和so也不能同时出现在一个句子中(from )。

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